Thanks for the feedback guys! Here are my thoughts:
lol, it's funny you call the glow "amateur" le chuck, I added it because someone suggested it in my "brainstorming" thread, and my first thought was that it would be cheesy and, exactly as you said "amateur hour". But I posted it with the glow and the feedback was good and I think it looks OK too. But I am still 50/50 on it. It's funny how opinions here are so far apart.
You are also the second person to mention the gradient not being strong enough, and when I look back at the silhouettes without the glow, if I get a little more contrast in there it will really look like a scene at twilight. So I will revisit it. The top color is already quite a bit darker than the bottom color, and I don't want a brighter red or blue than what is at the bottom. The problem is if I go too dark at the top when it is printed it might switch to black, and past experience with transitions to black with this vinyl were NOT good, the black came across lighter than the dark color and looked gray against it, particularly when backlit. I am going to match the marquee with the top color from each side, and I don't want it to turn gray and wash out like my personal cab does. I used a similar gradient (at least in red) as what I have now on the Nostalgia cab and in gloss laminate in person it looks fantastic. Plus the top will be more visible when the cab is in place than the bottom, and I don't want the top to be so dark it just looks black in the room. I will play around with it more though, the more I think about it the more I think the contrast will be good, especially if I ditch the glow.
I already have a lot of time into vectorizing the silhouettes, and I need a few more hours to get the rest of it done (part of this mockup is just using the cleaned up high res rasters, only Luke is fully vector, not that you can really tell in the jpeg shrunk by a factor of 12 that I posted, lol) The emblems also look washed out and blurry in the samples I posted, but at scale in full resolution there is some brushed metal texture that looks good. I rotated the emblems per a suggestion, but I am going to rotate them back, they don't look right to me. And the empire emblem was the only thing with some glow to it because it is black on a nearly black background and I wanted it to have a different style than the rebel emblem. The emblems are supposed to be a focal point, so I want them to stand off the artwork and have the gradient and silhouettes be the "scene". I thought about adding stars to the upper part of the art, but so far when you are looking at 25x72", they just look like dust on the screen or detract from the flat feel of the rest of the scene. Perhaps I will experiment with it.
I am shooting to be delivering this in 3 weeks, and it takes a week to get the artwork shipped out here, and with bowling season starting up next week and school starting for my kids, I might have 20 hours of total time per week (shop time + software time + art time) to put into this at most, so I don't have much time to mull over the artwork and perfect it as much as I would like. After the last project getting hung up for 4 extra days waiting for the USPS to take 6 working days to deliver a 2 day priority package, I am trying to get art out to the printer by Tuesday at the latest. I had no concept on Thursday, and here it is Sunday and I have over half the art and half the structure already done. Moving fast on this, so not much time for development.
Regarding the curve, I didn't want to end up with a taitorama profile, and again the Nostalgia cab it is modeled after ended up with a really nice flow that worked well with the control panel angle. I would have to flatten out the CP angle to curve the bottom part of the side the same as the top if I didn't want the lines actually start to go the wrong way.. And I just spent a few hours getting the sides cut out, so even if I wanted to change it (which I don't) it is a little late, lol.
lol, yeah, everyone (including myself) thinks of the road runner first when hearing his last name. If there was a major character or ship in Star Wars that had to do with a coyote it would be a slam dunk, but since there isn't it wouldn't make much sense to mix the two. One of the first ideas was to do the whole cab like a ship, which I liked but there was no way I was going to be able to get the art the way I wanted without commissioning someone to do it, and I didn't want to go that route. If I had stuck with it, I considered either naming the ship "Starship Coyote" or give it a model number like the "TK-Coyote MK421". But it would have probably been lost on the 7 year old boy who this is for, lol..
As generic as most of this is for you guys, for the family who will get it, it will be incredibly unique..
***For reference, the above comments were regarding this "first draft" which I have since replaced in my main post***
