OK, I really like where this is headed for the artwork. Very original yet very familiar. Anyway, I have a few suggestions...
1. Definitely keep the font on the sides rather than in front of each player - maybe even blow the font up to the point of a little overhang as long as it's still legible.
2. Round the corners on the inside of each CP cutout to match the flow of the rest of the top
3. Definitely use blue font for "Cliff Hanger" on the pink background for contrast.
4. Further to #3, I'd be curious to see how this would look: Move the "break" from the blue to pink on each side to between the words "Cliff" and "Hanger" making sure the colors were alternated (blue font over pink back and pink font over blue back). At least move the "break" though because lining it up with your cutout/bezel is kind of distracting to the eye (maybe slant it?).
5. In each corner where the horizontal instruction cards are NOT, you should try and replicate a portion of the sideart you posted (I think the artwork of the dudes in black and yellow would look sweet). Blow the artwoerk up a bit to fill the space.
6. Around the monitor cutout or along the long edges you should try and replicate the lines from the original cab (make sure it's proportional too). See on the bottom of the original CP where it starts out a stripe of pink then black then blue then black then pink then black then blue, etc.? Try and maintain that on your design.
I know this is a lot of suggestions - I wish I knew how to use photoshop or something so I could just show you what I mean... anyway, keep up the great work!
