Re: your "rules." A good designer knows when to break them, and I think the logo needs a break from the "hard edges" rule. I would suggest using a fade in the logo like the original, rather than sticking by the rules. It will look better. Everything else looks stylized, but that just looks busted. Other than that...great job on the art. I'd also suggest pulling out a bit of the red/magenta out of the yellow light cycle. The color in the jpg looks like it is suffering from an unintended color shift. The colors in the movie were so vivid, and the rest of the colors you are using are vivid as well (hot pink anybody?) the yellows look a bit muddy. Regardless of your intention, I don't think this color reads "true"