Okay, I have to admit I like the second marquee better.
I don't know if it's because you've cleaned it up, or positioned everything nicely.....
Anyway, I really like the two-tone background. It definitely adds interest.
I think you've picked excellent colors for the lettering. That definitely ties it together with the girl.
Love it, and you shouldn't change a thing (unless of course you want to and it makes it look even better than it does now)
Maybe I should keep my opinions to myself as my wife suggests.
