Feedback on CPO (Joust)

[mike boss]

I'm working on a CPO for a project.
I've never done a CPO where I did not have a template to follow.
I'm very nervous.

I think in the end the CPO could be cut, and drilled out to the specifics of the design. However, how do I know the design feels good ?
I find this quite daunting a task to be honest.

Even lining up player 1 and player 2.

Should they be an equal distance from the middle, or should the pods be an equal distance from either side ?

Any advice and feedback is welcome.

Thank you


*** some of these pics are simply close up, detail pics/ some are the early draft ***

[mike boss]

Some revisions to the artwork.
And the marquee to go along with the CPO.

I like the version with the bevel/embossed detailing.  I later changed the grain texture (not shown) to have more black in it. Really makes the grain texture pop.
I'm quite happy with that.

I think for best results once finalized the art will need to be printed to scale and  tested for fit.

Any and all feedback welcome. Thanks

[sellsellsell2000]

Need help on the logo??

[mike boss]

Need help on the logo??

A Joust logo ? Meaning a knight on an ostrich, or the text based logo ?
I'm doing this for a customer who likes the Old English style font to be honest.

[mike boss]

I drew this for sideart, I used the pen tool, but set the brush to pencil.
I'm still learning to draw in Photoshop.
It was my understanding that despite the pencil looking "jagged" (for lack of a better word) up close, when printed it is actually quite smooth looking.
I certainly hope that is the case, as this is going to be printed in a rather large size.


*** I've added some shots showing the progression of the artwork ***

[mike boss]

I guess no negative feeback is a good thing !

[sellsellsell2000]

I guess no negative feeback is a good thing !

+1

[eds1275]

Another alternate X-Men Universe where cyclops rides his mighty bird steed into battle!

No really though it looks good. The only thing I can say is this guy is battling likely to the death and seems pretty snmiley about it.

[mike boss]

Thanks guys appreciate it.
I'm new to drawing in Photoshop, and in general my drawing has declined a ton over the years.
I want every customer to be happy and this task was kind of intimidating.
But some great minds (and artists) here, so the feedback is massively important.

Thanks all