Fellow steampunk fan here. Nice job, though I'd agree with you about the jukebox comment. That's not really a juke. more of a phone/ipod docking station.
I like the "roll top desk" slat look you've got going on the sides, though, I think i'd have routed a track in the front and back to set the slats into. That would have made for a cleaner look IMO.
Also, the wood gears on the front are pretty slick, but they kind of seem two dimensional (ie, a bit too flat).
Maybe make a window on the front with the gears layered and showing through. Then, it looks more like the whole thing is clockworks.
And brass! Lots o' brass!
