That's an interesting notion.
I think the up-firing screen with mirror you sketched would work better for a full size machine that is tall enough for the marquee to be above you, so your eye level is never above the actual marquee screen.
For a bartop, I agree with Titchgamer; flip the whole thing over, down-firing screen at the very top, and a periscope type mirror, since your eye level should never be below the actual marquee screen.
It won't ever look like a conventional marquee, but, it might be a really cool effect. (A couple full size original cabinets did internal mirror bounces on the main screen just because it's a cool effect.)
I'd say mock it up in a manner such that you can tune the mirror angle to hunt for the sweet spot. It won't necessarily be exactly 45', if your natural eye height to the machine isn't exactly level. (And if you do mock it up, please shoot some video for us of moving around it and what it looks like.)