Nice work. I do some chainmail work myself. I notice you are doing butt-links. How are you cutting your links to get them so clean, dremel and jig?
I just looked at your Etsy store and part of the problem you are having may be, and this sounds silly, your prices are too low. When Etsy or craft shoppers see prices as low as yours they tend to automatically think that it's mass produced India or China imports. I'd seriously think of bumping your prices a bit. Also, your product copy is a little dry. There is no "Oomph" or emotion to it. I recommend finding some over-emotional, poetry writing, philosophy major, college kid to gush up your copy.
Sounds silly, but it works.