critique: niiice start man, good job. my first impressions of what of this first drawing...
1.the angled line at the top initially follows the cab then, strays and goes straight down while the cab angles forward. -in the line drawing this is visually disturbing to me (imo) BUT, maybe that could be hidden with the colors you choose (like when painting odd shaped cars).
2. the line at the bottom sticks out and down for what seems no reason -i instantly think of a chair.
3. i really like where this going, i totally get the "ARCADE" text, good job. i KNOW what i'm looking at, and it's stylish.
as a former graphic artist, here's a nugget...
1. the brain is a PATTERN MAKING MACHINE. it finds patterns in EVERYTHING you look at ***even when you're unaware of it***. so when something "looks cool" and you cant put your finger on why -it's because it makes sense some how. in good design, everything has a reason, even if for no reason.
2. axiom #7: if something doesn't "quite fit", doesn't align, or just doesn't look quite right... FLAUNT THE DIFFERENCE. a designer will run into the problem of an object that just won't align. at that point, instead of producing something that's disturbing to look at, it's better to take the flaw and over exagerate it, to make it bigger, turn it side ways -then it's a feature, not a flaw.
let me know if i can help with anything