Hi RnR,
I can see from your photo's that you have cut the slot bigger to allow for more travel.
It could be that you have soldered the reed in upside down which may effect it.
I suggest that you unsolder the reed and move it more towards the edge of the plate, you can extend the other end by soldering on a piece of 45 amp fuse wire (coil it round a paper clip so it looks like a spring with a leg on it, this can be slipped ovet the reed wire and slightly copessed to for a good soldered joint).
Regards
Alan