I like them. I have a few hopefully constructive thoughts. The text Starcade seems a bit too skewed. Maybe you can straighten the letters up a bit and it will read more easily.
Have you thought about making the lines come out as well , the same angle as the Title. That might really pop the text out nicely.
The second one looks good too. Perhaps you can change that drop shadow from that light gray to something more bold so the text pops!
just my thoughts, It needs to please 1 person. You