This is much better, IMO.
Of course I have notes take it or leave it... the "Blip2.0" on the front is too big.
I would either:
1. get rid of it entirely and extend the circuitry down the front; or
2. extend the circuitry down the front and shrink "Blip2.0" by a lot - maybe mimic Spin/Move/Action/Roll and put Blip2.0 in front of a white rectangular box - and offset it all the way to the right.
Right now your eye is drawn to the gigantic font when the star of the show is the elegant CP you created.
LOVE the Data70 font!!
Of course I have notes take it or leave it... the "Blip2.0" on the front is too big.
I would either:
1. get rid of it entirely and extend the circuitry down the front; or
2. extend the circuitry down the front and shrink "Blip2.0" by a lot - maybe mimic Spin/Move/Action/Roll and put Blip2.0 in front of a white rectangular box - and offset it all the way to the right.
Right now your eye is drawn to the gigantic font when the star of the show is the elegant CP you created.
LOVE the Data70 font!!
