Hello Billpa,
here's my impression...
so far, I prefer the version of post#6 with the joystick on it and the outline on the stick ball.
For the trial you did on post #10
- removing the ball outline :
the ball doesn't have the same style as the rest of the marquee.
I would put back the whitle outline.
- change the burst location.
It doesn't looks right. Its origin is from the stick ball, but it passes under the "O".
So my recommendation is try the one from post#6.
- increase the width of the shaft (leave the ball size as it is)
- try to define a bit more the "M" and "U" (a bit less solid, add 2 small triangles for the M and
remove a thin U shape section for the U, but keep it chubby...)
I would also stay away from changing some character to pacman or ghost, unless you're a huge fan of pacman.
This is to keep your marquee to the essential...
Take of discard my suggestions as you see fit.
Looking good!
Jay
