From my Project Announcement. I figure some of you arty types don't check there, so I posted it here as well.
Potential artwork - I'm looking for some feedback. The marquee is 16" x 2.5".

I usually prefer the more simple stated marquees, but this one seems a bit too simple for me. The problem is, since there is very little room on the marquee - I can't really think of what else to do. I could outline it or something - just unsure.
Fine as is or.... ?