I've been working on it for a while, and for the most part I'm satisfied, but I'm open to any suggestions.
First off, a few problems: Will the huge white laser jet stream thing be too distracting with a light behind it? I was thinking about just layering some extra paper in that certain area if it turns out it's too bright. Seems like it'll work, but I'm a mere llama, what do I know? Also, when I started playing around with photoshop I had the image's resolution set at the standard 72. Should I do something about it? Is there any way to convert it without redoing the image? It shouldn't take more than 30 minutes to redo, so that's ok if I have to.
I'm currently working on a space-themed cp overlay to match. . . hopefully I'll have that posted soon.

Edit: Woohoo, it worked!