Peter Pepper - Burger Time Sideart Vector WIP

[allroy1975]

I'm mostly looking for feedback.  What am I doing wrong, etc?

Keep in mind this is my first vectorization of anything ever.  So far the image doesn't seem too complicated, but I'm REALLY not looking forward to the pepper shaker

He's got a HUGE shadow on his right, I'm gonna add that later (kinda so it can be taken off if you don't like it.).

Here's what I have so far.


Well, what do you think?  let me have it.

Allroy

[Generic Eric]

Can you post the original to compare it to?

I'm no vectorer (?) but from your posted pic it looks like its coming along nicely.  My only crituqe would be that the letter p looks a litle off.  Maybe its the color; it kinda looks flat.  

The detail in the face are sharp.

Good work.

[Ad_Enuff]

I'm mostly looking for feedback.

Well, what do you think?  let me have it.

Allroy,

Great work for your first time!

Don't get bogged down too much by other peoples opinions only take advice.

Take it slowly bit by bit and you will do fine! Keep up the work!

I may just use your final version myself to create a MAME DVD cover.