first marquee ideas

[bloodyviking77]

Hi all, trying out this illustrator gear for the first time and trying to sort out some ideas for my marquee.

This is a "first draft" sketch of where I want to head.

any feedback welcome.

(I know I need to do something about the background . . .)

[BobbyG66]

Looks pretty good.

I would work on the red border.  It's pretty big, so make it look 3-D. You could make it pop out and have a rounded look to it.  

The words retrogeek are popping out with the shadow. if you make the border pop out, they will be at the same "level"