Feedback on my Final project website

[missioncontrol]

I had to do a website for my webdesign final project can you guys take a look and offer some feedback of anything that might be off.

thanks

(oh and the contact us part isn't supposed to work)

link

[Hoopz]

Cool site.  Several things to consider...

-The links in blue text are hard to read on black background.

-On the Construction page, you may want to create more paragraphs and space it out slightly.  It would probably be easier to read for some people.

The Intellivision picture rocks!  But I may be biased. 

Its a pretty good website.

[Havok]

Looks good. But a cool effect if you can manage it: make the buttons depress when clicked, instead of just a standard hyperlink.

Also, I second Hoopz comment about the blue text on black.

[2600]

Couple of notes:

-Ditto on Blue over Black
-It's confusing have two ways to browse the site. i.e. the bar up top and the ones on the side.  Currently, I prefer the ones up top.
-The bar up top.  When you mouse over it, is it suppose to do something.  Looks like you are doing something but it's just static.
-I like the row of cabinet pitures up top, but the oldskool.com looks out of place and distracts from it.

[missioncontrol]

Looks good. But a cool effect if you can manage it: make the buttons depress when clicked, instead of just a standard hyperlink.

Also, I second Hoopz comment about the blue text on black.

I tried that But because of the size of the buttons it wasn't too noticeable

I'll mess around with that static effect and do something different


thanks everyone keep them coming.

[mahuti]

If you need a very simple script to get your contact page working, let me know. I can do them in my sleep, and have a few premade scripts with minimal BS required to set up.

And to reduce load times.... graphics like gameroommain.jpe should be created at-size rather than scaled down. It'll save some K and rendering time.

[missioncontrol]

thanks for the offer mahuti, but since it actually isn't going to be a live website getting the contact page working isn't required for the class.


also thanks for the heads up on the gameroommain.jpe I must have missed that one when I was resampling images. I'll have that fixed and uploaded in the morning.

I will also use white insted of blue for the links.

[mahuti]

Didn't get that it was for a "CLASS"

A design class? Or something more casual?

[missioncontrol]

intro to web designs

[Bones]

Wooohoo. I got my pic in there.

[missioncontrol]

now your going to be famous

[Hoopz]

Very nice!  Good job.

[missioncontrol]

thanks we have to go up front and introduce them here in a few minutes

[versapak]

The Push To Reject button doesn't seem to be working. 



 




Not bad. I think it would be nicer if the index page were centered though.

[missioncontrol]

well I presented it today in my class. the instructor had really good comments to say. We'll see what kind of grade I get.

[AtomSmasher]

Wooohoo. I got my pic in there.

Woohoo.  One of mine is in there too.

[missioncontrol]

Wooohoo. I got my pic in there.

Woohoo.  One of mine is in there too.

now your famous too

I want to thank you again for letting me use your pictures


btw: the last picture on the construction page is mine so see I don't just post on EE. EE just keeps me away from finishing it.  It looks like that still except now it's bight yellow and hat a TV in it

[Lilwolf]

I didn't go through each link.  I'm not sure how deep in your assignment covers (top page only?)

But my comments would be this. 

1) each page have a very different look/feel.  Ignore this if you only designed the first page for your class.

2) the joystick is at a different angle then the buttons.

and what others said (button presses should be shown, coin button should do something, maybe even play a sound of a coin drop.

And if you want, you could have the icons/images link to online versions of each game maybe?  but that might be too much.

But I like the overall look / feel.   I think it might be a bit busy on the page.  But I don't like pages with ever inch filled.  The Click on buttons... I think should be removed.  Might be bad for a class though... but who whouldn't know and why would that be the second largest font?  But I can see teachers pushing instructions.

Anyway, good luck

[Jabba]

Hey MC, I like, I like. Good job on you first Web page...

[missioncontrol]

update:

I got a 98% on the project 

[Bones]

Outstanding.... And you owe it all to my picture.

[missioncontrol]

Outstanding.... And you owe it all to my picture.

I think that's what cost me 2% 

[RayB]

A couple pages have inconsistent widths.

Spelling errors here and there.