Descriptive Essay

[missioncontrol]

I have to do a 3 page Descriptive Essay for my Eng 111 classthat's due Monday....

Can I get you guys to proof read it and tell me what you think....

I wrote it on the atmosphere of an acrade in the eighties........

it's in a gmail accound I set up a while back.....


www.gmail.google.com


username: pcpowerpoint

password: byoacmember

I copied and pasted it  the text of it in the e-mail body and added it as an attachment in a word file. for which ever way you wanted to read it......

thanks.......

[tommy]

Well done, you forgot the "s" on monitors in the first section.

[Zakk]

I think you should write about tolerance of others in the workplace!

Or "supressing anger and haterd of others"
Or "why not to shoot your co-workers"
Or "mr meanie gets fired"
Or "what goes around comes around, mr intolerant"
Or

[missioncontrol]

Or "why not to shoot your co-workers"

I can allways use that topic on my argumentive essay I'll have to write..........