Firstly, apologies as I feel I've posted bits about this everywhere. Thought I'd come to the specific artwork forum for some expert advice!
So, having listened to various feedback over previous attempts (see
http://forum.arcadecontrols.com/index.php/topic,132749.0.html) trying to finish this off.
This is starting to feel better. I started with bitmap drafts which felt OK. However, I also wanted artwork vectored as a tip of the cap to original arcade artwork. Problem being, I'm trying to vector airbrushed artwork, and of course it doesn't handle gradings well!
Original bitmap is the first. Vectored version the second and vectored with a xenomorph overlay the third (which hides the main problems area - the white "egg silo" on the left):


What do you think? I would have preferred the one without the xeno, but that grading on the "egg" i think just looks too bad. Therefore I'm leaning towards including the xeno. Also - any comments on placement etc?
Lastly, redesigned Marquee:

Would welcome any thoughts. I'm desperate to get this artwork bit finished... it feels like ti should be pleasurable!
Thanks folks.