Very nice work, I really like how the Yun guy in the background turned out. I think having the focus on one person can actually really help a marquee if its done like that. I think the only thing you could do is maybe lay off the glow effect on the text, and maybe make it a little bigger, or maybe try to somehow get Yun infront of the text, because he's the best part of it in my opinion, although the rest is very cool. The blue and red in the background is a nice touch, although sometimes its easiest to go with a single color, you can try either way though, I'm sure they both would look fine.
-Keep up the good work
-Luke