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| paigeoliver:
It looks great. The only problem is that it comes off a bit like a Dragon's Lair bootleg, rather than like a standalone concept. At least it doesn't look anything like those horrible "Willis" repro art kits from back in the day. |
| jginiso:
Thanks for the suggestions. I may touch up the marquee lettering to make it stand out more. Noticed the teeth were a little too long too; I had to elongate everything in the mouth so the trackball would fit. I'll post again after I make some changes. I hear you about it looking like a Dragon's Lair cab but I kind of dig that artwork for the side panels... |
| CthulhuLuke:
Ok, thats very very awesome artwork you got there. Really good job on the editing of the dragon's lair marquee thingy, very very cool look indeed. Only real comment I have on this piece is that you might want to consider (remember, it looks really good now) if you rotated the left and the right cirlces that have the monk and the Link character so they face towards the 3rd and 4th player when they play. It would be good for when your 2 extra buds are playin, so that their artwork is facing them instead of being at such an angle ya know. The only other thing I can think of is make sure you get rid of all the white jaggies around Link, that extra 30 minutes to an hour spent making him as clean as possible is definitely going to be worth it at 300 DPI when you print this thing. Btw, what program did you use to make that layout so clean, did you autocad the control panel first to get the perfect dimensions? Whatever you did, it looks aweseome. -excited to see your final work -Luke |
| jginiso:
Thanks for the reply those are really good suggestions. The source image for Link was a much lower resolution than the others so he didnt scale very well. I will definatly clean him up. The marquee, control panel and sideart were all done in Photoshop. The plan is to print a full size template and cut the cp from that.... |
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