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jginiso:
Here are my CP overlay, marquee and side art. I like the idea of having a fantasy themed cabinet and two of the games that ate alot of my allowance growing up were Gauntlet and Dragon's Lair. I modernized the gauntlet overlay a little by changing the characters. The white buttons next to the player pics are start buttons. The trackball will be positioned in the demon's mouth and the white buttons around him are the mouse buttons (not sure if I need that many). The buttons for each player are yellow, red, blue and green respectively. I dont know if I need to outline them with some artowrk or if they will stand out by being a little different shade of yellow, red, etc than the backround on the overlay. Ay input is appreciated. Thanks.

http://james10583.tripod.com/index.html
AceTKK:
I like it a lot!  My only suggestion is to modify the text in the marquee to make it stand out more against the flames.  Maybe put a black stroke around the outside edge of the letters.  Nice work!

-Ace-
Lucky S.O.B.:
THIS IS SOOOOOO AWSOME!

One suggestion is to make the controls and buttons the same color as the background like Zinfari (http://zinfari.iwarp.com/). I especially like the marquee it gives me some ideas for my cab name/marquee.

Maybe a red light up trackball in the dragons mouth?

-Derrick
Brax:
The only other thing is that the Demons teeth will get cut off by the trackball. I'd shorten the teeth so the tips just touch the outside diameter of the trackball. (just make sure you can centre the trackball bang on.....)
I'd be tempted to put more of the black tribal stuff (not as dramatic as the other two) between player 1 and 2 to keep it consistant as well.
Frostillicus:
That looks great!  I'd do what the other suggested, perhaps - but it looks pretty good to me.  
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