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Title: Advice on my artwork - dragon ball z dbz cab
Post by: Steven kurylec on September 09, 2012, 01:23:48 pm
Hi guys im having trouble with my artwork!

Im building my first cab and ive ran out of wood so i thought id make a start on the art.. The cab is going to be based on my favourite game of all time - dragon ball z hyper dimension for the snes, I know its a console game but im just building what i wished i saw as a child walking into the arcades  ;D I'll post up what ive got so far and you guys (i hope) can tell me whats missing

(http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/6735/controlpaneln.jpg)

control panel - im hiding the admin type buttons


(http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/1182/marqueej.jpg)

marquee


sorry, id embed them but im being rushed around by my girlfriend to go to a bbq
something is missing on both of them but i have no idea what, they just dont look right :-?

anyway, ill be thankfull for anyhelp

cheers

Ste
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork..
Post by: Steven kurylec on September 10, 2012, 12:45:29 pm
Just redone the marquee today, im pretty happy with it what do you think..?

(http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/1643/marqueev2.gif)
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork..
Post by: drventure on September 10, 2012, 12:46:46 pm
Simple and clean.

I like it.
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork..
Post by: Steven kurylec on September 11, 2012, 04:21:11 pm
Thanks =)

Ibe been working on a comicstrip style background for my control panel.. took hours ! what do you think to this? its a start in the right direction but i dont want to clutter it..

V2
(http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/9664/controlpanelv2.jpg)


V3
(http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/7707/controlpanelv3.jpg)
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork..
Post by: drventure on September 11, 2012, 04:29:19 pm
I dunno. The comic strip layout doesn't really appeal to me, but that's just me.

I kind of liked your first "all black with the two black and white figures" cp layout you posted earlier, though.

Still, really depends on the overall look you're after. All black like that isn't going to look much like a traditional arcade machine.
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork..
Post by: Steven kurylec on September 11, 2012, 05:13:11 pm
Hmmmm im stuck then, how about a good vs evil with 2 different colour schemes the the older dbz games for the vs screen... A dbz version of the turtles style cp overlay? Thanks for the input by the way :-)
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork..
Post by: jennifer on September 11, 2012, 05:14:51 pm
   Jennifer likes the first set, a simple clean attraction draw.... The cartoon one looks a little busy to me. The buttons too seem set up
for someone who is right handed, turned like they are. I"m not left handed, But I would think that could be hard to play if one was.
   But in the end it"s all about what pleases you, and the kind of look and feel your going for.
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork..
Post by: drventure on September 11, 2012, 09:22:06 pm
Hmmmm im stuck then, how about a good vs evil with 2 different colour schemes the the older dbz games for the vs screen... A dbz version of the turtles style cp overlay? Thanks for the input by the way :-)

That could work, I've seen similar approaches before around here that looked really good.
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork..
Post by: Le Chuck on September 11, 2012, 10:18:07 pm
Comic strip is totally cluttered.  Use the first one with just the two characters in B&W and change your marquee background to B&W having only the DBZ logo in color.  Drop that same logo at 1/4 size onto the upper left of your CP to tie it together and add a splash of color.  Go with ring lit buttons like Nep used in the Two Headed Beast and call that sucker bad ass.  As for sideart I'd go simple and stick with a B&W look and color logos.  Maybe something really simple just masked over the entire side.  Example below using a Moon Patrol cab silhouette:

Title: Re: Advice on my artwork..
Post by: TopJimmyCooks on September 11, 2012, 10:27:43 pm
WTH are dragonballz?
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork..
Post by: Le Chuck on September 11, 2012, 10:29:56 pm
No idea.  Some form of candy I think. 
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork..
Post by: Steven kurylec on September 12, 2012, 11:20:51 am
Im loving thank side art concept i think im going to make the cab more simplistic looking after seeing that! thanks for the comments im going to have a few hours on it tonight and ill post up some more stuff..

I thoght americans loved dragon ball z?! wheres the hardcore fans at  :P show yourselves!
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork - dragon ball z dbz cab
Post by: Steven kurylec on September 12, 2012, 12:49:32 pm
OK revision 4 now what do you think to this ?

(http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/3020/controlpanelv4.jpg)


i need to brighten up the guy on the left but you get the jist ..
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork - dragon ball z dbz cab
Post by: Le Chuck on September 12, 2012, 12:54:30 pm
I like the CPO where they were both on the right more better.  Buttons over faces never really comes across right.  Plus Blondie will have a joystick for a nose.  Also, all the negative space on the left gave the CP a nice modern edgier look.  Your current offering is less dynamic.     
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork - dragon ball z dbz cab
Post by: Steven kurylec on September 15, 2012, 09:57:41 am
I dunno for some reason I dont like the first one  ??? probably because i just threw it together to get initial opinions, how do you feel about this concept:

(http://imageshack.us/a/img204/9370/controlpanelv5.jpg)

based on the character select screen from the game the cab is based on:

(http://imageshack.us/a/img267/6312/dragonballzhyperdimensi.jpg)

Or another idea:

(http://imageshack.us/a/img823/7206/controlpanelbuugohan.jpg)


Once ive got the background right i can work on my joystick surround art.. what do you think? different shapes maybe ? still the first post?
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork - dragon ball z dbz cab
Post by: yotsuya on September 15, 2012, 12:31:39 pm
I dunno for some reason I dont like the first one  ??? probably because i just threw it together to get initial opinions, how do you feel about this concept:

(http://imageshack.us/a/img204/9370/controlpanelv5.jpg)

This one obscures faces. Not a fan.

I like the advice you've been getting- simple is better.
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork - dragon ball z dbz cab
Post by: Le Chuck on September 15, 2012, 05:32:10 pm
(http://imageshack.us/a/img823/7206/controlpanelbuugohan.jpg)


The orange one is bleh.  The one above is nice but you'll be taking the cab in different direction artistically - which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but I do like the black and white treatments more.  Your first attempt needs some minor refinement but IMO is the most dynamic and interesting you've done to date.  Sometimes you hit it out of the park on the first swing.  Nothing wrong with that. 
Title: Re: Advice on my artwork - dragon ball z dbz cab
Post by: Steven kurylec on September 15, 2012, 06:44:33 pm
Cheers, ill tidy up the first attempt then and go for a black and grey style , ill post up when i get the artwork fitted

Thanks everybody