Website Check Please

[Avinitlarge]

Could some people look over my website please? I get visitors but no sign ups. Im not asking for sign ups by the way (You can if you like ), I just want to see if people understand what you have to do. Its doing my head in.

Ive actually got 4 sites but i'll stick with the 1st one which is www.freebiethings.co.uk

I will accept any criticism Good or bad, I just need it to work properly and I want people to understand how it works

TIA
Paul

[BobA]

Well I looked and was confused.  I finally read the fine print on what referrals were and that and that some sort of deal with an outside company had to be made to make the referral valid.   What type of thing you have to do is what is in question.  Do you have to buy something or subscribe or what.   What might this cost so we can figure out if anyone else who we want to refer might also make the referral valid?  I personally cannot seeing myself signing up if I cannot first see the overall picture.

[Avinitlarge]

Excellent. Thank you    Finally, Someone has finally told me as it is. Ive asked people on a website that deals with this kind of thing all day and they said it looks fine. I wasnt convinced though.

Right, The other 2 sites I have have more or less the same content, So I will forget them. Ive got another, I used my own ideas on that site. What are the opinions on this one? www.free-xboxlive.com

Cheers

[RayB]

Both sites look "spammy" and amateurish. I wouldn't sign up for fear of being swamped with SPAM email.

What's with centering all your main content? When is the last time you read an article and the column sentences were all horizontally centered???

[Avinitlarge]

Oh bum. Looks like ive got alot of work to do. Ive got a funny feeling im going to fail. Saying that, Ive never failed on projects before, I just need to spend a load more time at it.

[RayB]

Maybe your front page should list "current deals", and keep this list updated and fresh. Get people to click on them for more info, before sticking a sign up button in their face.

Old saying: 90% of the work goes into the last 10% of [product]. Keep polishing until it shines.

[Avinitlarge]

I suppose I would get the same for this site www.iphone-for-free.co.uk

I have had people say they like this one though, I dont know why, Its no different to the others. Just different pictures

[Avinitlarge]

Maybe your front page should list "current deals", and keep this list updated and fresh. Get people to click on them for more info, before sticking a sign up button in their face.

Old saying: 90% of the work goes into the last 10% of [product]. Keep polishing until it shines.

Thats funny, Ive just changed that. Ive only linked it to another page. Im going to spend alot more time polishing

[Avinitlarge]

Maybe your front page should list "current deals", and keep this list updated and fresh. Get people to click on them for more info, before sticking a sign up button in their face.

Old saying: 90% of the work goes into the last 10% of [product]. Keep polishing until it shines.

Thats funny, Ive just changed that. Ive only linked it to another page. Im going to spend alot more time polishing

I should have said "Ive Changed that on the iPhone site, Not the others"