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Critique my marquee art!
ragnar:
Well, insomnia also implies that you are up late at night and in a tired state or near dream state. A black cat at night can be a scary thing and exist in nightmares. It's not a direct correlation but I still see some correlation. Maybe I just think that the slits look cooler.
Good point though about the eyes. I'm in no rush to order the marquee so maybe I'll give human eyes a shot.
Reading more on insomnia. Insomnia is having trouble falling asleep or the inability to stay asleep. In both cases, Insomnia is typically followed by functional impairment while awake. If video games are keeping you awake, the cause would be related to "sleep hygiene". Sleep Hygiene can be defined as the controlling of "all behavioural and environmental factors that precede sleep and may interfere with sleep
Ginsu Victim:
It doesn't work. Something about it just doesn't seem right.
ragnar:
--- Quote from: Ginsu Victim on September 14, 2010, 02:45:02 pm ---It doesn't work. Something about it just doesn't seem right.
--- End quote ---
The latest version of the cat eyes? I think the text needs to be muted a bit.
I've been thinking about changing the background effects.
Ginsu Victim:
At first glance, I couldn't see the first "I", so reading it was difficult. The slanted eyes for "I" and the other font don't really go well together.
opt2not:
How about just having the eyes in the background, and clearing the rest of the face out, making it black? Like 2 eyes peering out from the darkness?
My other suggestion would be to separate the background image from the Title-text, having the text stand separated, and have the eye image perhaps above or below the text.
Just a thought...
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