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First Marquee--Please Critique!!!

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helios:
This is my first marquee attempt for my mame machine. Wanted to go with a piratey kinda feel. Contructive criticism would be highly appreciated. I hope the image shows up ok--first time posting here.

[EDIT]
I just replaced the old one with this slightly modified one. I added a little darkness on the right, sharpened the shadow on the Time Machine, and changed the font for 'the'. I want to keep the stroke on Time machine lower, because I want the image to stay as clean as possible. I tried upping the stroke and it got messy. Thanks for all the replies so soon. Any other suggestions are greatly appreciated.

3dmacman:
Not bad ;) The the in the should be in the same font as the rest of the marquee. Is there a map in the background? If so I might bring it more into focus? ??? just my .02

Frostillicus:
I'm diggin' it.  I would change the 'THE' to a different font - or better yet lose it altogether.  Maybe a thicker black stroke on the main text - maybe double it.  I really like the colors, and the images in the background are great.  I might tweak it more by darkening the outside edges like you did on the left side.  Nice marquee :)

GSXRMovistar:
Very nice, really liking it. Good to see something original, Look forward to seeing the final version.

tagnetti:
I think it looks very nice. I agree about the font. maybe just drop it. For some reason my eye jumps right to sonic and dirk. Maybe adjust the hue a bit or desaturate a little.

Or maybe bring the drop shadow on the text closer with less blur and it will pop.

It is very nice to look at however, great job.

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