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Main => Everything Else => Topic started by: missioncontrol on June 16, 2005, 01:42:02 pm
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I have to do a 3 page Descriptive Essay for my Eng 111 classthat's due Monday....
Can I get you guys to proof read it and tell me what you think....
I wrote it on the atmosphere of an acrade in the eighties........
it's in a gmail accound I set up a while back.....
www.gmail.google.com
username: pcpowerpoint
password: byoacmember
I copied and pasted it the text of it in the e-mail body and added it as an attachment in a word file. for which ever way you wanted to read it......
thanks.......
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Well done, you forgot the "s" on monitors in the first section.
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I think you should write about tolerance of others in the workplace!
Or "supressing anger and haterd of others"
Or "why not to shoot your co-workers"
Or "mr meanie gets fired"
Or "what goes around comes around, mr intolerant"
Or
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Or "why not to shoot your co-workers"
I can allways use that topic on my argumentive essay I'll have to write.......... ;)