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Main => Artwork => Topic started by: DaemonCollector on October 26, 2004, 12:18:36 am

Title: Marquee Try, comments...
Post by: DaemonCollector on October 26, 2004, 12:18:36 am

Heres a try at at a marquee, the ship still needs some work...but what you guys think.

Title: Re:Marquee Try, comments...
Post by: mahuti on October 26, 2004, 12:45:52 am

Looks good, and different. I would suggest spending more time on the "insert coin to continue". Right now it;

1. looks like an afterthought.
2. provides so much contrast it is distracting from the best parts. (namely the name marquee)

Title: Re:Marquee Try, comments...
Post by: DaemonCollector on October 26, 2004, 07:00:52 pm

Changed some things on the marquee, moved the ship and added shading to it. And fixed the coin text. So all I need is something chasing the ship.

Title: Re:Marquee Try, comments...
Post by: mahuti on October 26, 2004, 07:38:23 pm

I would suggest making the ship move in the opposite direction.

Left to right suggest motion & speed.
Right to left suggests halting.
Not a big deal, but somewhat of a design / direction tenet.

Title: Re:Marquee Try, comments...
Post by: Halo on October 29, 2004, 06:31:31 am

I think it's awesome :)