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Title: [Opinions / Critiques / Suggestions] Marquee
Post by: Manias on September 11, 2016, 07:00:16 am
Hi everybody, I just create a little Marquee for my bartop arcade, I just want to know your opinion about it ?
I don't know about the right side, with pacman ?

(Ps : If you loved and want the .psd with the layers, I can give it to you)
http://upload-image.fr/image/xY9 (http://upload-image.fr/image/xY9)
(http://upload-image.fr/image/xY9)
Title: Re: [Opinions / Critiques / Suggestions] Marquee
Post by: 05SRT4 on September 11, 2016, 05:52:58 pm
Its a good start. The left side with DK really pops out more vs's the rest of it, might just be the color and detail. IMO the arcade font needs more, like a thicker outline or something.
Title: Re: [Opinions / Critiques / Suggestions] Marquee
Post by: Manias on September 11, 2016, 06:25:22 pm
I'm not satisfying by these marquee ^^ thanks I will try to add a bigger border to the Arcade font. I think I'm gonna change Pac Man by Megaman
Title: Re: [Opinions / Critiques / Suggestions] Marquee
Post by: vwalbridge on September 11, 2016, 06:55:27 pm
I think you should reconsider your design. Here is some constructive feedback:

1. New Super Mario Bros. was never in the arcades
2. The art style between pac-man, DK and mario bros do not match. For example, pac-man and the mario background are 3D but DK is 2D
3. None of the layers look like they belong together. (see #2) The background does't blend with the foreground.

Title: Re: [Opinions / Critiques / Suggestions] Marquee
Post by: Titchgamer on September 12, 2016, 03:32:30 am
^ what he said.
Title: Re: [Opinions / Critiques / Suggestions] Marquee
Post by: Manias on September 12, 2016, 05:49:02 pm
I think you should reconsider your design. Here is some constructive feedback:

1. New Super Mario Bros. was never in the arcades
2. The art style between pac-man, DK and mario bros do not match. For example, pac-man and the mario background are 3D but DK is 2D
3. None of the layers look like they belong together. (see #2) The background does't blend with the foreground.

You're right I know for the #1 but it was a good picture ^^ I'll delete it, right for the #2 and #3 that's why I was ... "in trouble" with the pac-man part