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ChadTower:

I think jim forgot his sarcasm tags on that one.  Or his asbestos underpants.  One or the other.

shmokes:

--- Quote from: ark_ader on May 03, 2009, 04:56:31 pm ---
Does that help you understand Shmokes or should I draw you a picture?  ::)


--- End quote ---

After reading your response three or four times I think I get the basic gist of what you were trying to say (though I still don't know what it has to do with the comedic value of pneumonia, but whatever).  I like the rolly eyes, BTW.  There's nothing like being pissed off at others when they are unable to understand your unintelligible writing.  You said drugs are shipped through Mexico.  Are we psychic?  We were supposed to intuit that when you say drugs are shipped through Mexico you mean many people in Mexico share needles?

By the way, a major problem with your writing is your seemingly random use of commas.  Commas aren't decoration.  They're not like sprinkles on a donut.  Commas dramatically change the meaning of sentences.  Some of your comma placement is distracting, some of it confusing, and some downright bizarre. 

A good rule of thumb when it comes to commas:  When in doubt, leave it out. fixt When in doubt leave it out.

shmokes:
Difference being that I can identify a parenthetical phrase.   ;)



edit: Upon reflection, though, you're probably right.  Leaving it out would have been illustrative.   :)

Ummon:
---steaming pile of meadow muffin---, were that just what it was. Hey, ---smurfin--- CIA, get on the ball, yo!

RayB:
The Koala eats, shoots, and leaves.

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