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| protokatie:
Constructive criticism: You might want to tone your page down quite a bit. As it is a bussiness page, I would recommend getting rid of all animations, and changing the page to have a solid neutral coloured background, and would suggest using a colour scheme for foreground objects (such as text, buttons etc) that isnt based on using every primary and secondary colour. Just my thoughts. When I first opened you page I thought it was some kind of myspace or geocities type page, and then only after looking at the content realised it was a bussiness page. (For a good ref, look at Ultimarc's page, although not the best to navigate it looks clean and professional) |
| quarterback:
--- Quote from: spacies on February 06, 2008, 09:38:45 pm --- --- Quote from: samshaw946 on February 06, 2008, 07:37:33 pm ---Which links bar exactly? --- End quote --- This one: --- End quote --- While it looks amateurish on spacies screencap, it looks even worse on my screen. It's barely legible with all the letters smearing into each other. Here it is at 100% And here's a closer look: Seriously, what letters are these: BTW: No offense intended, I like your cabs. Just constructive criticism. |
| spacies:
Hey Quarterback, how did you view it like that? Do you have a big widescreen? I am looking at it via 15.4 widescreen laptop. The main reason I didn't like the look because it is all bunched up, after seeing yours it looks better. |
| spacies:
Oh, Try this: put the cursor on the edge of one of the links on the main page, mostly Products 1, 2 and 3. The picture shakes like its having a seizure. I tried to video it but my cameras refresh rate is too slow. Somethings not right there. |
| leapinlew:
--- Quote from: FhM on February 06, 2008, 07:03:39 pm ---I would look at a content management system if I were you. In the end it makes it a lot easier to manage your website and easily change the look of the whole site when you feel it needs updating. --- End quote --- This is very very good advice Samshaw. You should leave this version you created in frontpage and start working on a new site very soon that uses some CMS. You'll love the clean look. Here are some examples: http://www.nusbaumdesigns.com/examples.html If you want, I can put you in touch with a very reasonably priced person. Since you have all the content, your 2.0 version of your site could be created very quickly. Like quarterback said, this is just creative criticism. Your site is functional and does the job. If your happy with it, thats all that matters. :cheers: |
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