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AKA Kaytrim:

I have linked up with another BYOAC new member, Mista-FraggadeliX.  He has kindly accepted to take on my artwork.  Attached are his first drafts.  Please comment on them as both he and I would like to hear your thoughts, thanks.

This is the Logo / Marquee


Here is the Monster


And finally the mad scientist



TTFN  :cheers:
Kaytrim
tommy:
Great work so far, i would use a different style lettering for the name though.
BamBam:

--- Quote from: tommy on December 02, 2006, 03:01:50 am ---Great work so far, i would use a different style lettering for the name though.

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I would agree.  It is hard to read the "Franken" text.  You may also want to make the text larger.  The pics of Frankestein and the Mad Doctor look nice.  Can't wait to see them in colour.
Looking good so far.

John
quarterback:

--- Quote from: BamBam on December 03, 2006, 05:36:35 pm ---
--- Quote from: tommy on December 02, 2006, 03:01:50 am ---Great work so far, i would use a different style lettering for the name though.

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I would agree.  It is hard to read the "Franken" text.  You may also want to make the text larger. 
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Absolutely.  Too hard to read and too small.  But beyond that, it's looking cool!
Xiaou2:

 An idea...

  When picturing Frankenstein,  I think of all the Whacky
and Wild scientific gadjets involved. ..

 Instead of just a Marquee art..  you could actually
insert Gauges (pressure, electrical, etc),
dials, Flip switches, etc..  into the
cab.   Various  lighted things.

(parts = surplus place  or  junkyard..ect)

 You could add the occasional strobe flash to
act as lightning   hehe   Tho, that may be a
bit too distracting...  could be limited in time,
as well as able to be turned off.

 Same for built in Creepy sound effects.

 I also like the Tesla posts..  which again, could be
created in 3d, using wood rings and pipes..etc.

 THe actual name, could be cut out letters, that
hover in space (support wire behind) and
maybe are backlit.

 
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