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DaveMMR:
It wasn't horrible, but definately needs to be tightened. As shmokes pointed out, you're leaning too heavily on a "catchphrase". When was the last time you heard someone refer to "Wha'cha talking bout'?" or "Dynomite" as comedic gold? It will get old fast.
I thought the whole bit where you were arguing about why you won't review horror movies had potential - just needed more dedication from you. Just seemed like you were "blase" about your disdain for horror. I dunno - maybe it's just me.
P.S. to guy on the left: lose the cap! It looks awkward and adds nothing. It takes a lot away from the supposed "irony" of two "professional movie critics" delving into profane apathy. Same goes for your "laugh" Craig - I kept thinking you were breaking character but didn't have time for a second take.
Clever, biting, sarcastic commentary on movies has comic potential, but you definately need to farm for some writing assistance. Just post a few fliers at a local college - you'll get some decent material from people who won't mind working for little to no money in order to "hone their craft".