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itismejs:
--- Quote from: mmmPeanutButter on February 06, 2005, 02:59:56 pm ---I wrote this poem last night. I don't think its very good, but it's not terrible.. (or is it?) :D
I went to buy an arcade A
at a downtown warehouse raid A
but they fell off the truck B
so oh what the f**k B
I guess an arcade will be made A
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Sad attempt at a poem...Who the hell has an AABBA rhyme scheme. (Try changing to ABBA) And who writes in quintets with iambic pentamiter!!!!
DaveMMR:
--- Quote from: itismejs on February 09, 2005, 05:50:30 pm ---
--- Quote from: mmmPeanutButter on February 06, 2005, 02:59:56 pm ---I wrote this poem last night. I don't think its very good, but it's not terrible.. (or is it?) :D
I went to buy an arcade A
at a downtown warehouse raid A
but they fell off the truck B
so oh what the f**k B
I guess an arcade will be made A
--- End quote ---
Sad attempt at a poem...Who the hell has an AABBA rhyme scheme. (Try changing to ABBA) And who writes in quintets with iambic pentamiter!!!!
--- End quote ---
An AABBA rhyme scheme is a limerick. Shakespeare sometimes broke into limerick. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Limerick_%28poetry%29 God, I am so bored...
itismejs:
--- Quote from: DaveMMR on February 09, 2005, 05:59:55 pm ---
--- Quote from: itismejs on February 09, 2005, 05:50:30 pm ---
--- Quote from: mmmPeanutButter on February 06, 2005, 02:59:56 pm ---I wrote this poem last night. I don't think its very good, but it's not terrible.. (or is it?) :D
I went to buy an arcade A
at a downtown warehouse raid A
but they fell off the truck B
so oh what the f**k B
I guess an arcade will be made A
--- End quote ---
Sad attempt at a poem...Who the hell has an AABBA rhyme scheme. (Try changing to ABBA) And who writes in quintets with iambic pentamiter!!!!
--- End quote ---
An AABBA rhyme scheme is a limerick. Shakespeare sometimes broke into limerick. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Limerick_%28poetry%29 God, I am so bored...
--- End quote ---
But shakespeare wrote in iambic pentameter almost all the time will litte exception. (except for segments of plays especially the beginning where you will see double stresses
DaveMMR:
--- Quote from: itismejs on February 10, 2005, 05:38:54 pm ---
--- Quote from: DaveMMR on February 09, 2005, 05:59:55 pm ---
--- Quote from: itismejs on February 09, 2005, 05:50:30 pm ---
--- Quote from: mmmPeanutButter on February 06, 2005, 02:59:56 pm ---I wrote this poem last night. I don't think its very good, but it's not terrible.. (or is it?) :D
I went to buy an arcade A
at a downtown warehouse raid A
but they fell off the truck B
so oh what the f**k B
I guess an arcade will be made A
--- End quote ---
Sad attempt at a poem...Who the hell has an AABBA rhyme scheme. (Try changing to ABBA) And who writes in quintets with iambic pentamiter!!!!
--- End quote ---
An AABBA rhyme scheme is a limerick. Shakespeare sometimes broke into limerick. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Limerick_%28poetry%29 God, I am so bored...
--- End quote ---
But shakespeare wrote in iambic pentameter almost all the time will litte exception. (except for segments of plays especially the beginning where you will see double stresses
--- End quote ---
I never mentioned anything about the meter - just the rhyme scheme. ;-)
itismejs:
--- Quote from: DaveMMR on February 10, 2005, 05:44:34 pm ---
--- Quote from: itismejs on February 10, 2005, 05:38:54 pm ---
--- Quote from: DaveMMR on February 09, 2005, 05:59:55 pm ---
--- Quote from: itismejs on February 09, 2005, 05:50:30 pm ---
--- Quote from: mmmPeanutButter on February 06, 2005, 02:59:56 pm ---I wrote this poem last night. I don't think its very good, but it's not terrible.. (or is it?) :D
I went to buy an arcade A
at a downtown warehouse raid A
but they fell off the truck B
so oh what the f**k B
I guess an arcade will be made A
--- End quote ---
Sad attempt at a poem...Who the hell has an AABBA rhyme scheme. (Try changing to ABBA) And who writes in quintets with iambic pentamiter!!!!
--- End quote ---
An AABBA rhyme scheme is a limerick. Shakespeare sometimes broke into limerick. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Limerick_%28poetry%29 God, I am so bored...
--- End quote ---
But shakespeare wrote in iambic pentameter almost all the time will litte exception. (except for segments of plays especially the beginning where you will see double stresses
--- End quote ---
I never mentioned anything about the meter - just the rhyme scheme. ;-)
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