I have been away for a while from the artwork forum and come back to... this.
- the art style of the characters clashes with the 8bit rock/grass wall
- the company logos are floating in the air, the legs and feet should be in front of them
- a grass/rock wall in front of a... grid?
- company logos in front of a grass/rock wall? Makes no sense.
- if you do this marquee and keep the 'Nintendo inspired CP', the art styles clash
I would simply keep the 'Nintendo inspired' marquee and maybe remove the joystick. If you absolutely want to do the new marquee, I would suggest replacing the grid with the green background of the 'Nintendo inspired' marquee, so that CP and marquee look more consistent. And ditch the logos. And replace Mario and Sonic with 8-bit versions so that they fit the art style.
Sorry if this sounds a little bit harsh, but I really think that this new marquee is a step backwards.