Cory -- Because we're friends, it's time for a little tough love.
Please tell me this is
not how you planned for this CP to look.
You may have thought you
had vision, but of the 4 characters on the CP, two have their faces covered with buttons and the other two look like they are Joynicorns.
Sorry to say, that puts this CP at 0 for 4 on composition.
It will look so much better if you move the characters a bit so the faces (
especially the "windows to the soul" a.k.a. the eyes) aren't covered with buttons and joysticks aren't sprouting from foreheads.
If you shift the CP several inches to the left, I think it will elevate this build to it's rightful place as one of your best.
The new profile and adjusted marquee size are both excellent as is the marquee itself.
The fit and finish show that you truly are mastering the art.
The
only thing hurting this otherwise gorgeous build is the double-coyote ugly CPO -- re-compose that and this is a bases-loaded out-of-the ballpark home run.
Scott