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Critique my marquee art!
PsychoMikey:
Looking good, looking good.
I would maybe make the eye's actual I's in the same font. see attached file.
Rick:
What I like: the eye thing. I think it's a wicked theme. What I don't like: the fact that in using the letter "I" from the word "Insomnia" causes the title to be offset by one character. Personally, I like Javeryh's image idea, as you only have point of focus and can adjust the word and image appropriately.
I'm sure there's some artsy-fartsy way of saying what I just said, but I hope you get what I mean.
Malenko:
I liek yours, but I like javeryhs (just needs some color). However, it is YOUR cab so do what YOU like more.
ragnar:
PsychoMikey,
That is a nice piece of work you did!
I am going to probably revamp things a bit more with the image I have and order it. Maybe by the end of the week. Regarding the image I have, the ovals for the eye slits are very similar is size/shape of those in the cat image.
I think I might lighten the text a bit though. I want the eyes to pop more. I have also thought about an intentional mispelling. Instead, calling it INSONMIA.
leapinlew:
--- Quote from: ragnar on September 14, 2010, 11:08:34 am ---PsychoMikey,
That is a nice piece of work you did!
I am going to probably revamp things a bit more with the image I have and order it. Maybe by the end of the week. Regarding the image I have, the ovals for the eye slits are very similar is size/shape of those in the cat image.
I think I might lighten the text a bit though. I want the eyes to pop more. I have also thought about an intentional mispelling. Instead, calling it INSONMIA.
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Insomnia is a human thing, which is why I picked a human eyeball. Cats are about as far from Insomniacs as you can get. I've never met someone who said their cat doesn't sleep enough...