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PsychoMikey:
Looking good, looking good.

I would maybe make the eye's actual I's in the same font. see attached file.
Rick:
What I like:  the eye thing.  I think it's a wicked theme.  What I don't like:  the fact that in using the letter "I" from the word "Insomnia" causes the title to be offset by one character.  Personally, I like Javeryh's image idea, as you only have point of focus and can adjust the word and image appropriately.

I'm sure there's some artsy-fartsy way of saying what I just said, but I hope you get what I mean.
Malenko:
I liek yours, but I like javeryhs (just needs some color). However, it is YOUR cab so do what YOU like more.
ragnar:
PsychoMikey,

That is a nice piece of work you did!

I am going to probably revamp things a bit more with the image I have and order it.  Maybe by the end of the week.  Regarding the image I have, the ovals for the eye slits are very similar is size/shape of those in the cat image.

I think I might lighten the text a bit though.  I want the eyes to pop more.  I have also thought about an intentional mispelling.  Instead, calling it INSONMIA.
leapinlew:

--- Quote from: ragnar on September 14, 2010, 11:08:34 am ---PsychoMikey,

That is a nice piece of work you did!

I am going to probably revamp things a bit more with the image I have and order it.  Maybe by the end of the week.  Regarding the image I have, the ovals for the eye slits are very similar is size/shape of those in the cat image.

I think I might lighten the text a bit though.  I want the eyes to pop more.  I have also thought about an intentional mispelling.  Instead, calling it INSONMIA.

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Insomnia is a human thing, which is why I picked a human eyeball. Cats are about as far from Insomniacs as you can get. I've never met someone who said their cat doesn't sleep enough...
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