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Turnarcades:
Play around in any art studio. This effect is right there in Photoshop along with a load of other filters.
ragnar:
I spent some time tinkering today.  I have a few versions that were made but I think this was the best one.  Even though the text is simple, I actually like it!  Having the eyes centered looks better than shifting things so that the word is centered.

Notice how the left side is photo quality and right side is using effects.  Almost as though to say that one is transitioning from an aware state to an sleep deprived state!  I do have this image in a 300 dpi PNG version that is sized appropriately.

I figure a marquee like this from across the room when backlit will show mostly the eyes which I think would be pretty damned cool.

Thoughts?



leapinlew:

--- Quote from: ragnar on September 12, 2010, 11:05:38 pm ---Thoughts?

--- End quote ---

I like the direction your headed, but this is too difficult to read.
ragnar:
The comment here was consistent with what everyone at work said.  The conclusion is that the text is to dark.

So I did 2 things in this revision.  I made the text stand out more.  I also scaled everything up so that the eyes fill more of the marquee.  I am not sure why it took me this long to make the scaling change.

Two images.  One at 72 dpi (the first one) and a smaller one at 15 dpi.

Comments welcome.
bkenobi:
I like it.  Good stuff!
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