First, the feedback:IMO, that marquee looks really
unfinished. The font could use something to spruce it up more...perhaps using a different font, or adding a separated drop shadow, or extrude it so it looks more 3D. Some more effort other than just hitting the text button and typing in the name!
Also, everything is so flat! Add some self-shadowing to that gate, some lighting highlights (pick a light direction too), up the contrast more. Do an image search on their promotional posters, you'll notice there's a lot more colour going on than just flat gray shaded models. Use reference images!
Speaking of, it all looks gray, and doesn't look that good as is. You can barely make out the sprite glyphs, and the whole image gets over-powered by the your over-zealous use of the liquify filter. It's not clear at all. A good artist trick is to look at image while squinting, if you can make out all the details then it's clear...if not, you'll have to push the contrast up more.
I would also work a bit more on the star field in the back.
Second, the scamming.Yeah, a Tron Restrictor for free open-sourced models...that's a scam deal. I must call you out on this.
http://blenderartists.org/forum/showthread.php?t=103776Took all but 2 secs on a google search.
I only ask that I get credit for the model, and I would be thrilled to see any projects you use it for.
Not only are you trying to hawk someone else work for your own gain, but you didn't even bother crediting the guy!
As an artist myself, this really pushes my buttons.
The guy spent the time making the model, was nice enough to release this for everyone to use free of charge, and you're trying to pull this "barter" crap??
It's a good thing Encryptor wasn't born yesterday.
Encryptor, you can probably find a quick tutorial on how to render out a high-res picture in Blender, if you're unfamiliar with the program. It's open-sourced, and has quite a community following it, there's a ton of documentation out there free to access.
Trading a Tron restrictor for free artwork...